Zippy Ziggy

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    Re: Zippy Ziggy

    Bài gửi by Jinny on Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:04 am

    Về hình thức:

    - Nét vẽ nói chung tạm ổn

    - Nhân vật nam chính đẹp trai yêu thế (trừ một số đoạn như quái vật >.<)

    Về nội dung:

    Ưu điểm là hài hước, gây cười cười to

    Nhược điểm là hơi bị thô bỉ ở một số đoạn =.="


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    Re: Zippy Ziggy

    Bài gửi by Jinny on Thu May 13, 2010 11:03 am

    Nguồn

    Bài của BadBoy không hiểu tại sao không xem lại được.
    Post lại bài mới cho mọi người.

    Zippy ziggy (chapter 1)


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